tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6252114052287906463.post3955088649507331880..comments2013-12-12T09:07:56.675-08:00Comments on Morgan Rushlow's EDM 310 class blog: Blog Post 2- “What Will Teaching In The 21st Century Be Like"-collaborative project-Braque group-Morgan Rushlow, Daniel LoVett and Mary BrabstonAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09258977225804384447noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6252114052287906463.post-75755015779326437432013-09-14T13:05:16.788-07:002013-09-14T13:05:16.788-07:00This applies to your individual post.
Thoughtful....This applies to your individual post.<br /><br />Thoughtful.<br />John Hadley Strangehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17484977903995419205noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6252114052287906463.post-60646440435192417672013-09-08T19:16:17.775-07:002013-09-08T19:16:17.775-07:00Hi Morgan!
In the collaborative blog post, I did s...Hi Morgan!<br />In the collaborative blog post, I did see a really long run on sentence that could have been divided into three to four separate sentences. It may have made your statements more effective. However, I do agree with yalls ideas in the post. Mr. Dancealot could have been a much more effective teacher by teaching the students actively and letting them get up and practice the dances, rather than teaching them through PowerPoints.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15728965779060352092noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6252114052287906463.post-88240219480927161352013-09-04T09:21:44.223-07:002013-09-04T09:21:44.223-07:00Comment on collaborative part of post:
"beca...Comment on collaborative part of post:<br /><br />"because the students were confused, bored and unsure about what to do when it came time for the exam- the students were not engaged in the learning process- it was unable to start up for them-just like a vehicle that has lost its fuel and oil and can’t start, demonstration and hands-on experiences with concepts are the fuel that drives the learning process and learning can’t begin without it. " This sentence should start with a capital. In addition, it is really a number of sentences crammed into one. My guess is that it really should be five sentences. That would depend on how it was rewritten (which should be done).<br /><br />"... problem in education still today because..." What does <i>still</i> add to this part of the sentence. I suggest that you remove this "still".<br /><br />"My thought was-hope those students..." Why "My" in a collaborative assignment? A : rather than a - is more appropriate. Better: We hope that...John Hadley Strangehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17484977903995419205noreply@blogger.com